hey nick! i really like the message in this; its really reassuring and sweet. the whole thing also looks pretty cool with the different shades of green. keep it up
i agree with claire a lot. it's a really sweet piece that makes me smile (: it might be only me, but when anybody uses that photo filtre it's kind of hard to read. but it's still sweet :D
This is very cool -- philosophical in it's approach. Try using open form, allowing you to be more creative with spacing and line breaks.
ReplyDeletehey nick! i really like the message in this; its really reassuring and sweet. the whole thing also looks pretty cool with the different shades of green. keep it up
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~claire
i agree with claire a lot. it's a really sweet piece that makes me smile (: it might be only me, but when anybody uses that photo filtre it's kind of hard to read. but it's still sweet :D
ReplyDeleteI also agree with claire. the message is really sweet and i like your style of writing alot. also the colors are really cool and match the theme.
ReplyDeleteIt starts out sorta negative, but at some point it levels out and isn't very negative.
ReplyDeleteI like how you relate this to real life on how everbody is unique, good job.
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